Wed 13th Dec, 2006, Inside My Brain, My Experience

i wish you were mine

you’re passing by behind me
and i smell the fragrance of your existence

among the bars
you are the red rose
inside this brick building of education

i saw a beetle
close to you
sucking the essence of you
but you feel the comfort

i wish you were mine
be my 3rd
and 1st
but i can’t get close to you
we are so far away
though you are JUST behind me

because I am too busy
breaking this wall of brick
to get out of it

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instant love poetry by me
i just dont have any ideas
what should I do with the flower
should i take it
and abandon my desire to struggle to getting out of the brick
or i leave it
so another beetle suck it

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  1. Comment by aad, December 18, 2006 @ 12:07 pm

    jare anti poligami kok nganggo be my 3rd….

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  2. Comment by lambrtz, December 20, 2006 @ 5:21 am

    aad u dont understand what “3rd” means
    dont u remember that I’m STMJ??!?!??!

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